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Prem Chandavarkar's avatar

I suspect that those who react this way are uncomfortable with what you have said, want to critique it, but lack any foundation for doing so. Painting themselves into a corner of critiquing the text without engaging with it, they punt to something outside the text without identifying how it should belong.

Dave Hamby's avatar

I love your work. I think you write beautifully. I don't always agree with the points that you make; in fact, I often disagree. What makes your work special is that your written word engages my brain and stimulates thought. Very often, it stimulates thinking in areas I wouldn't ordinarily spend any mental energy on.

One issue I have with your work, and with other writers, perhaps more so, is that you create essays that are more like a paper that one would turn in for an assignment their professor gave them. You cite too many supporting works, explain your point too thoroughly, cross too many t's, and dot too many i's. You repeat the main point. Very often, you and the other writers have an important observation to share, a fact that people really need to know, a trend that really IS alarming, and your message is lost in all of the supporting verbiage. Your written thoughts are just TLTR. (Too Long To Read).

I have to wonder if your motive for writing is to pass along information or to prove yourself as a worthy author? (Honestly, you're not nearly as bad as other SubStack writers I read.)

Sooo, your piece claims that the really hard work in creating it often lies in what to leave out. I commend the hard work you do and suggest you work even harder. (Please don't take this the wrong way.)

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